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Twisted Path. now there's an interesting one-- somewhat overpowered
at places (see overlord, end episode 1) but Twister's sense of humor
balances the story quite nicely, IMHO. (See dealings with Natsume,
episode 2, dozens of other examples all through it), His descriptive writing
is quite good, and I've run into many a fan of the series. I personally
like the story, as well.

;) *bow* Thanks B> If overpowered is the only critique then I'm happy. ;)
(I figure there should be at least one character that defines the term
power-overkill but still manages to attract readers. I'm building depth,
but slowly. ;)

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Well, I do have to say that the overpowered character does seem to be a 
recurring theme...and I'm guilty of it in my yet-unpresented "Full Circle"
story (Whenever I get off my ass and POST the damned thing!). I guarantee,
however, there will be NO overpowered Otakus, just an overpowered mystry man
heh!

(Sound of entire FFML groaning)

Jeez! Everyone's a critic!

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Now if you think overpowered....Twister versus UF! Now THAT would be
something. :) *snicker* Sadly, I have thought  of a beginning for that.
*rolls eyes*

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YAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!! Just how far do you intend to TAKE TP?!! Dang! And I thought
the Darlene-Elf in chapters 25-29 (?) (If you don't know what that is, pick up
TP from the FFML archives NOW and readit!) was a RPI (Ridiculously Powered
Individual)!!

Well, that's all I have to say about that!

-wyrm (AKA Tom Jefferys, Time Lord in his 5th incarnation ;)

"Only the extremely wise and the ignorant do not alter. Which are you, boy?"
-Confucious