Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic, teaser] Shaolin 1/2
From: Jim Franks
Date: 6/22/1996, 11:23 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com


What do you all think? Is this one a keeper, or should I keep fishing?

	Thomas Hamill

Go for it, It will be interesting seeing a much calmer/thinking Ranma deal
with Akane.

I could still see her getting mad, but Ranma mainting his cool.  Of course
sometime Akane would just get angryer and still give him a LEO launch
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Ben L. Harrison - HM1(FMF)/USN/RET
Harriso3@ix.netcom.com
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I agree, although I think it will be a tough one to write and keep funny.
9/10th of the situations Ranma gets into are due to his losing it.

Jim