Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic][Help] One Bad Day |
From: Michael Carlson |
Date: 6/20/1996, 9:59 PM |
To: fanfic@fanfic.com |
CC: fanfic@tendo-dojo.ranma.net |
I liked it. I think you should leave the area's you are thinking about taking out. It needs a little rewriting but they show something in the development. Keep it up Phoenix Ikki