I like the story so far.  As far what's next, I suppose the logical 
thing will be for Ranma and Akane to go home.  The question, obviously, is how. 
I don't really have any good idea on that.  Ranma and Akane might just 
eventually find their way to Florida.  Of course, for humor effect you can 
always have Ryouga coming from nowhere and asking for direction to Florida!  It 
really depends on how you want the story to develop, I supppose.  Good story. 
The story is too early for me to seriously comment it, but once you write more I 
should be able to provide useful criticism.  Now will anyone else please comment 
on my Chrono Trigger 1/2?

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"RANMA NO BAKA!" Akane Tendo from November Rain, the March song from 1991 song 
calendar, and plus another hundred sources in Ranma 1/2 anime/manga/fanficition

"Give me your best shot... if you're prepared for the void!" - Magus from Chrono 
Trigger 

Don Wang <dwang@sprynet.com>
RPG, strategy game, and Ranma 1/2 fan.