At 11:20 AM 6/18/96 -0500, you wrote:

On Tue, 18 Jun 1996, Andy Skuse wrote:

                          Bubblegum Collision
                              
           A Bubblegum Crisis fanfic by Douglas A. Reeves
                              
                              PART ONE
 

Well, an excellent beginning! I'm having alot of trouble lately with my own
fic and this lean and to-the-point story has put a fire under my ass. Well
done Doug! The pacing is excellent, the story always interesting, and a
fresh storyline to boot. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more :)

   Much appreciated.  At the moment I'm having to work out the most "in 
character" way for the Knight Sabers to respond to what happens next.  
Though I've hit the halfway point in the fic, the fun's really just 
beginning.

Heh! I know *exactly* what you mean <g>

Panda

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