warped reality part 7.01
C+C wanted please write to me

tendo dojo training hall

 < Did that hurt as much as it looked?> Ami asked in 
concern.

 < Probably more> Conrad answered as he limped 
towards the changing room.  < I think that was quite posible 
the most painful experience I have ever had in my entire life.  
Kuno has no pity> Conrad continued as he fell onto the floor 
too exahsted to go the rest of the way.  < how was your lesson?>

 < Oh it went very well,  I didnt get knocked around nearly 
as much as you.  But what are we going to do now?  I dont want 
to have to live all of my life here.  If we can deturmine why you and
I are being displaced maby we can figure out a way back.>

 < Ok then lets meet outside at about three.  maby we 
can track down Cologne and she just might be able to help us.>


five minutes later in the bathroom.

 < You are proceding along very well Conrad.> said 
Kuno.  < I can tell that you are able to see where you need to 
defend yourself and where you can attack, but you are too slow.  If
you can become faster then you will make a very good fighter.  You are
tall and have a long reach, use this when you are fighting, keep the
distance open and you will be able to strike at your foes without
fear, it is when they get in close that you get in trouble.  Then your
reach is a hinderacne and your lack of speed will be more noticable. 
I am looking forward to teaching you more tomorrow.>  With that Kuno
got out and left Conrad to ponder what he had been told.  [ That boy
might be good one day,  he has what it takes but his currnet level of
skill is depressingly low] thought Kuno as he walked out the door.    

Three thirty outside of the Nekohanten

 "Well here it is." Conrad said, "Cross your fingers and lets 
hope that she is still here."

 "Ok" said Ami, "But you realize that if Ranma is in china 
then most likely so is Cologne, and even if she is not this is real
life and not a manga, se probably wont know the first thing about how
to help us."

 As they entered the Nekohanten they were surprised at 
what they found.  Inside the place was empty.  Although the sign on
the door read open, no one was there to serve potential customers. 
The lights were off  and not much was visible through the gloom. 
[Well this looks promising] thought Con as he unstraped his boken for
the fealing of security that it gave him.

 < Lets look upstairs, maby they are not all gone.> he 
told Ami while trying to remain calm.  Something was making 
the hair on the back of his neck rise.  It felt like he was in a
horror movie just waiting for the evil nasty to come out and get him. 
Ami noded not trusting her voice, she too could feel the tention in
the air, as if lightning was about to strike.  Together they started
up the staircase in the back.  although they had not found anyone on
the fist floor it still seemed like somthing was here with them. 
Suddenly a chain wraped itself around con's boken pulling it from his
grasp, less than a second later he was flying though the air towards
the botom of the stairs.  As she saw Con fall Ami saw the shadows
converging on her.  She felt rather than saw the blow coming towards
her stomach, even as she somehow managed to block it however four more
punches landed and she traced an identical curve down the stairs that
conrad had just taken.  Landing with a sharp cry of pain as she felt
something in her left arm snap she looked up through a haze of pain
and tears to see a figure in long robes aproaching from the top of the
stairs, three gleaming blades apearing on its right arm as if by magic
as it decended the steps to finish them off.

Coments and critisisms and espesialy sugetions are well apreciated. 
how do you think my first figtht scene went was it clear what was
happening or not?