At 10:43 AM 6/16/96 -0400, you wrote:

On Fri, 14 Jun 1996, PhoneyNT wrote:

    "I remember when I was your age, I was so foolish then...but I had
so much fun with boys.  Did I ever tell you how I came to marry your
father?" 

HER FATHER????  Um....  If she married her father, would that mean she was
her mother?  ^_^ I think you'll want to fix that. 

oops!!!! i'll change "your" to "ranma's".

    Genma stood there, stunned that his ploy saved his life, not aware
yet that he had only around half of his hair still on his head. 

Nodoka is a klutz with a katana. 

perhaps

    Masahiko, encountering no resistance, grabbed the dress at the
shoulders and started sliding it downwards. 

    "Wow, cool, it's so easy to remove it.  Easier than putting it on. 
Hey!  Don't kiss those!  Come on, man!" Ranma thought. 

In the middle of the street??? 

i forgot to mention they were in an alley in the back of the building.

inside the coin slot of a change machine.  The Stealth Katana, she
called it.  Never leave home without it. 

Okay.... 

just a little fun.

    He regarded his male body, then grinned widely.  "Fuck this," he
said, then upended the bucket over his head. 

Why does he say that??  What is he refering to? 

his male self.

signed, PhoneyNT
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