Gotta hand it to ya, it's pretty good. :)

Thank you.

   Shades of the end of "Empire Strikes Back". :)

You know I didn't think of that....but now that you mention it...

   I love the computer displys sprinkled throughout the story. Really adds
something....I think Matt is the first person to write a fanfic with
visual effects. :)

I was hopeing that would work.

The constant "Genom wil add...to your bill" was a nice underscore of 
dark humor.

Thank you again.

   Steep bill. Very steep bill. And the poor sap loses his comfort-hole to
boot. (NO, you hentais, I'm talking about the apartment. :P) I'm really
starting ta feel bad for the poor kid.
   Well, only a little.

As I'm sure you guessed, this is set up for another cycle of 
stories...you can expect them MUCH later...like after I get done with 
this database project, and this networking project...

   I'll be waiting for more. The "Aftermath" review is still in progress -
I'd have finished by now if it weren't for Smoke and Mirors.

Hey, I just read S&M2 and I gotta say, it was worth waiting for....
   -MJT