1.  A Guided Tour or Even a patient person has a Breaking Point
BY Sebastian  <http://enterprise.mathematik.uni-essen.de/~bastian/>

This was a truly funny story. Giggle. I especially liked the title :)


2. Tenchi goes to Disneyland!!
BY Peter L. Ward          falcon@best.com

This is an interesting premise... you need to flesh it out A LOT
though. It seemed fragmented (yes I know it was only a preview).
Be sure to post the finished version.


3. Ranma 1/2: Aftermath
BY Matthew Trotter <trotter@bobcat.etsu.edu>
Couple fixes:
        The Saotome's were out bouncing around the yard as par the course, 
                        no apostrophe in Saotomes
        Nabiki blinked, this was too good to be true.  Could Ranma really be 
        talking in his sleep?  Even Miss Hinako was staring at him.  The look
        on Akane's face was classic. 
                        Nabiki and Kuno are in a different class than Ranma and
                        Akane.
        principle
                it is PRINCIPAL not principle
As always, GREAT!!!  MORE MORE MORE!! Did you ever read the "Romance of the 
Rose" ? Lots of personified emotions and such in that too....

I love the maibox and bush ending :)

4. Right Side of the Ledger
BY "Richard D. Lawson" <sterman@sprynet.com>

Hmmm... I really don't like old Nabsie too much, so I liked this fic. I have
great hopes that Nabiki will become less of a mercenary someday :)
Well written :).

5. "Itsu mo, 'Ucchan'"
BY mi-chan@ix.netcom.com (Washu's #1 Student)

This was just... simply... wonderful. I loved every line. Thanks for writing
it and sharing it with us.

6.  Ranma 1/2: Sour Times (Nobody Loves Me) 
BY gaffney@iconn.net

Well written :). Kind of a kicker after reading "Itsu mo, 'Ucchan'" but I got
into it :). 

7. JAD II - Still Dreaming, Chapter One
BY Henrique de Moraes Holschuh <henriqmh@ilhabela.dca.fee.unicamp.br>

Yup. I LIKE this. Dark and cool :). MORE MORE!!!

8. Ranma 1/2-Ranko 1/2:  Marital Arts 
BY polaris@interpac.net (Jon K. Hayashi) 

As always, very well done. However, where are you going with this fic?
Half the time I want to take it seriously, the other half you are 
doing this parody type thing. I personally perfer to take it seriously,
as I find the way the relationships are developing is very interesting.
Just a comment. Hey, can you write some more December's End please? :)


More soon!!

p.s. can someone send me JUST Nameless 8? THANKS!!!!!


-misachan
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