Boy, nothing like emotional angst to make you feel inadequate.
These are great.  I'm gonna have to rewrite Lucky.

Anyway:

Inward Love #3 - Wow.  All this, and it was Ukyou.  Who knows,
will Akane lose an eye with Shampoo, and a leg to Kodachi? ;-)
Seriously, this is cool, with an uplifting ending that doesn't 
have to be silly (yeah, I still have problems with that bit, but
oh well).  Will you be writing the beach story, and if so, will
we see a reconciliation between Akane and Ukyou?

Regret and Guilt - Excellent.  Gives you a lump in your throat.
I like the fact that it's deliberately not said that he was
cured.  After all, that wasn't the real problem.  Cool stuff.

Well, that was fun.  Back to Ryouga's pain now.

--Sean Gaffney
--Lucky'll be up by the end of the day.  I promise.