On Sat, 8 Jun 1996, Scott Baker wrote:

Since you said something about 3AM, I'l figure the typos were mostly the
fault of that, but just for constructiveness, here we go...

*Note I will try to indent this time

Good try! But you only indented 3 lines ^_^ hee! but that's a good start:)

	Ranma awoke from his sleep trembling and crying. 
The mosaic memories fill his head. Killing his will.

fill his head, killing his will.

"All I told her where lies, lies that where all my fault." Ranma said as 

"were" instead of "where" both times.

"Ranma, please stop." Akane said sobbing.

Akane said, sobbing.

No of course he shouldn't die!:) Sorry for the nitpickiness:) Keep up the
good work, make those parts longer!:) You're killing us:)
  
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