On Sat, 8 Jun 1996, Scott Baker wrote:

*Author note:
This story is not a comedy like
my other fanfic. It is a serious story.
This would have taken place before book 36.
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Ranma 1/2: The Trend in Sadness
By Scott Baker
Any or all insults go to:
digihalo@atom.com
*Note: Ranma 1/2 is a trademark of it's respected companies.
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Hmm... It's C&C Time.


You don't mess around. Ten lines in and your sticking the knife and 
twisting it! I like it!

Couple of suggestions:

1) It's a bit crumpled. It looks like you squashed it in an industrial 
   press!

2) I don't know that would come out with something along the lines of "Oh 
   my god!" It doesn't sound too japanese to me..

Other than that. Good. Dark fanfics are my favourite. Keep it up.

P-word.