Subject: Misa's Fic Reviews #2
From: Marisa Price
Date: 6/8/1996, 6:14 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Misa continues to read her back fanfics!!!

1.
                         The Attractiveness Factor

                      - Part II : Stuttering Manhood -

                                by PhoneyNT
PNT-- this is cool :). Hey... write more, ok?! And don't let yer folks
catch ya if you turn it into a lemon :) Get that hot-key to a word doc
working ^_^


2. Ranma 1/2: Angel's Spit
			By: Charles Lewis

Well... I thought this was VERY VERY well written, and the language was
terrific. However,
could you get more depressing? I hope you follow this up with an explanation
of why Akane
has had such a sudden change of heart... and what does the title mean ?

3. Ranma: Bourgeoise Blues

	By: Charles Lewis

Gosh. Did you have a bad week or something? Again well-written, though a
little OOC and VERY
pumped on the angst. Write a happy fic, ok ^_^ heh heh.

4. Symmetric Polynomials, part one (of an unknown integer) by Ross McKenzie

HOW DID I MISS THIS? WOW!! I love D&I and I am SOOO glad there is more!! Did
I mention I love this
story? Well, I like the way the next story is being set up at least! MORE
MORE!!!

5. Nameless 7 by Mike W. Loader

(The guards grab Akane, and begin to drag her off.)
Akane: Ranma!
Ranma: Akane!
Tsung: No, you idiots, not her. We said the beautiful one. What 
would We want with her? That one's average at best...
(The guards release Akane and grab Ukyo, then begin to drag her 
off.)
Ukyo: Ranchan!
Ranma: Ucchan!
Tsung: Now that's more like it.
Akane: (indignantly) What am I, chopped liver?

could it get any better than this? This was HILARIOUS!! This is such a good
series...

When does part 8 come out ?

6.  "untitled" And a non-depressing Ukyou one at that!
                       by Erin Mills

"Halfway across town, Chris Willmore slammed down the phone. 
Honestly, you'd think that a restaurant called "Ucchan's" would serve 
okonomiyaki, but they wouldn't answer the phone to let him confirm!"

LOL!!! Did you ever find any, Chris-kun? ^_^

P.S. This was  great, but WHERE IS A NEW TGACFH?! HEH. Just thought I
would bug ya :) 

7. Desperate Measures [sort of a lemon]  by Joyce Meadows

Uh... Well... can't say I LIKED it... but it was an interesting story. That
kind of stuff always gives me the willies though. Well-written, but on an
uncomfortable subject. ^_^

8.  Operation: Unlikely (Part 2) by Erin Mills

Yet another story by you, Erin, that I would love to see more of... do you
just do this to have a mass following of people who want more of your stories?
^_^ Hee hee. 

9.  Life Falls Apart by Isabel Arantes

Wow. Depressing, but VERY VERY good. I am impressed.


Coming soon! Aftermath, Right Side of the Ledger, about 20 Sailor Moon fics,
Tenchi goes to Disneyland, "Itsu mo, Ucchan", Dark Chonicles, Sour Times,
Tears, Strange Farewell... and much much more (my mailbox is FULL!!)

Again, sorry to take so long to get these read and commented upon...


-misachan

 
Marisa Price
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