Gosh!
I *like* it!
The spin that you've put on the Genma/Nodoka relationship is fascinating,
and it makes a a fair amount of sense, all things considered - I think that
you've got Nodoka's character nailed.
Definitely looking forward to the next parts!
Zen-
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