On Tue, 4 Jun 1996 23:26:02 -0600 Neill Walker said:
: Would someone please read the little scene I posted this afternoon? I
: don't need in depth C&C, just a little guidance. Is the style ok? I
: don't want to write a big story if no one likes the way it's written...
I did read it and found it well crafted although a few more
paragraphs would have made for smoother reading.
Alas, the topic is not exactly to my tastes, so I would probably
not read a whole fanfic in this vein. But if I *did* enjoy stories
like that, I'd definitely like yours.
Sebastian