On Fri, 7 Jun 1996 11:42:09 +1000 (EST) Martin Bennett
<plunger@yoyo.cc.monash.edu.au> writes:

Ten years have passed since Ranma left. I remain alone, beholden to 
a promise unspoken, yet well made.

I look at others around me. I see Ryouga and Ukyou together. They 
have a good life, a home, a family... All the things I wished for 
myself and Ranma... Likewise, Shampoo and Mousse have moved on, 
making a life for themselves. I cannot help but feel a pang of 
regret that I cannot share the life they have. I remain apart from 
them, incomplete without my fiancee.

As the years pass, I feel my body telling me to move on, telling me 
to live. But I cannot. I love Ranma and I will wait for him...no 
matter how long it takes.

The story was good till here, you need to expand on these, give more
fleshed out examples, maybe a whole other chapter about it.

Shinobi

Ranma 1/2          BGCrisis/Crash         Dominion          Macross Plus

A!MGoddess        Guyver         Project A-ko     Gall Force