Subject: Re: [FFML] [FFML][FanFic] Regret (draft)
From: Otaku@nashville.com (James Bateman)
Date: 6/7/1996, 12:53 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Gosh, Plunger!

'Tis a pity about your grades, but if this is the result, then I'm glad
that Kun-chan did it to you!  Excellent work for a first (in more ways than
one) draft!


I only have one question, and I don't guess the answer really matters, I am
curious...


In the following scene....

"Akane..." he whisperes softly, almost nervously, as if to confirm my
presence. I blush a little and look up at him. "Hai, Ranma. Welcome
home..."

He smiles and puts his arm around me, "I'm sorry, Akane... I-"

I place a finger to his lips to silence him, "I know... Just promise
never to leave again."

"I promise..." he says softly.

I look into his eyes and see the certainty of his words, and finally
my torture ends.


Was Ranma going to apologize for being gone so long, or was he going to
apologize for coming back without having found a cure?  Did he find one, or
did he just grow up enough to come to terms with his condition?  To realize
that it really didn't matter, and that he could quit torturing himself, and
Akane?

Enquiring minds want to know!

Thanks!

Zen-


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