Some comments on the last Jeff Rutsch's e-mail:
I think that some of the commenters believe that because I advance an
argument, I must agree with it. I attempted to give arguments for and against
deviating from the tone of the original. But since deviating from the tone is
a departure from the original (such as rewriting history, introducing new
characters, etc.) it is a decision that takes the writer from the default
mode of the original tone. Its true that there are great examples of fanfics
that recreate or deviate from the tone of the original series. But it is also
true that there are fanfics of both types that really "Suck Moby".
Since one of the purposes of changing the tone is to explore another side of
the characters, this automatically presumes that the readers are familiar with
the characters as they exist at this present point in time (which for Ranma
would mean the end of the manga). I never argued that changing the tone
couldn't be done or done effectively. I argued that changing the tone is not
a story in itself; it is a tool that the author uses to effectively tell the
plot. And I put forth that when changing the tone, it is important that the
characters remain in character, because it is easy to ignore characterization
to advance the plot. (e.g. you could write a really dark story about Ranma
beating up on the three Tendo sisters and have them just calmly accept it as
their due. Except of course that they wouldn't, and Ranma wouldn't hit them
in the first place. It is not in character for any of them, but the story
could still be written.)
Readers aren't entitled to anything except a bunch of words. What exactly
adds to the effectiveness of the story? Who's to say that it wouldn't it be
more effective to lay in plot lines and details early so that the reader,
after reading the story through, can go back and say "hey, this guy started
this thread way back in episode 2".
Any fanfic that doesn't explicitly state that it does not tie-in, in whole or
in part, is automatically assumed to do so completely because you are using
the original author's characters. And unless it is also specified, the fanfic
will be assumed to occur right after the ending of the series (if at that
point) with no changes to the characters. As "story" time goes on, more
changes can be made to that starting condition because it is believable that
the characters would change over time.
About western reactions - how do you know that the reactions aren't eastern,
as well? There is no emotional generalization that covers the whole of the
orient. It is not emotions and thoughts that I was talking about, but rather
facts. It is a fact that Tokyo has a rough latitude of 36 degrees North
(about the same as Las Vegas), so you're probably not going to get away with
writing a New England-style winter.
Similarly, Akane and Ranma live in Nerima. It is a fact. That means that
they're not going to be celebrating American holidays. But they are going to
be celebrating japanese ones. Even in the current Viz translation, there have
been a number of festivals portrayed in the manga. Knowing what goes on in
those festivals would make writing it more realistic, though it is possible to
deviate from that. But the author should know what parts are realistic so
that he can more effectively evoke images.
Going back to my example on December's End. A lot of the New Year's Festival
is guesswork on my part. I don't know that there's a festival going on at
that time (such as there is in August), but it is not an unreasonable
assumption to make that there is one, given the importance of the time of year
to the japanese culture. The mochi pounding, at least in Hawaii, is pretty
much a family event rather than the community event shown in the series. But,
I made the following reasoning: 1) Dr. Tofu's clinic is a known business, 2)
Business and cultural events usually coexist, 3) Dr. Tofu's clinic caters
mainly to the elderly, 4) Mochi is an important part of the New Year's
celebration, and 5) Some elderly couples would not have children or
grandchildren to visit and make mochi. So I had Dr. Tofu sponsor a mochi
making "booth" where community members, especially the elderly, could come and
make mochi for New Year's. And since I also had that huge Kodachi chase scene
right through the middle of the festival, I needed something that would bring
the Tendos and Saotomes to it. A both complemented each other in that you
could use one to set the stage for the other
Strictly speaking, we're all writing without permission of the original
author. The "continuation to Angel's Spit" was just an example that it would
be possible to take an existing story and change the tone and the facts as
presented without explaining why, just as some fanfics do. In my
"continuation", it would have been completely consistent with the original -
and just as mysteous in why the characters act the way they do.
Changing the tone is a decision the author has to make. But it shouldn't be
the whole of the fanfic; it should be on the same level as "how do I most
effectively tell this story", in regards to tone, or the inclusion of sex, or
lemon scenes, or other plot elements.
JK