Subject: Re: [FFML] Bubblegum Warners up to ch. 4
From: Harriso3@ix.netcom.com (Ben L. Harrison)
Date: 6/5/1996, 12:17 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com


Hi everyone!

Here's BGWarners up to chapter 4. There's a new theme song and I added in
the parody of Patton's speech in chapter 2 but I'm still not quite
satisfied with it. Any suggestions? 

Saf

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Well I did like the theme song and the Patton bit.

Maybe you should have a bit in which Nene is tempted to keep the _Size_ of
the appartment after the Warners did their, re-modeling?

Love the Leon bits, I think when Priss finds out she might cut the Warners a
little slack as in:

"You did WHAT Leon?"

When is number 5 coming out? ;0
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