Subject: Re: [FFML] [FF] Thy Inward Love - Part I
From: "Mike W. Loader" <mloader@scs.unr.edu>
Date: 6/5/1996, 12:16 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

Very, very good. A nice analysis of the motivations behind Genma, Nodoka,
and Ranma. Superb portrayal of emotions, feelings, etc.
   Having Kasumi get angry was very much, IMHO, in character. The only
thing I can possibly think of that would break through her daze is a
threat to her family.
   Kuno comes across as just as pigheaded as ever. That's a relief. ;)
   Watching the new, reformed Nabiki is rather interesting.
   I'll enjoy seeing more of this. :)

- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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