Subject: Re: [FFML] The Right Side of the Ledger - Final Draft
From: Sebastian Weinberg
Date: 6/4/1996, 4:59 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com


On Tue, 4 Jun 1996, Mike W. Loader wrote:

On Mon, 3 Jun 1996, Richard D. Lawson wrote:

I would like to thank everyone for their suggestion's about Nabiki's 
nightmare.  I went back and forth over the different version, and 
everyone had excellent reasons for which one I should use.  After coming 
back to the story cold and reading each version, I finally chose one.

*sigh* Awww....I liked the stream-of-consiousness method a lot better. Oh
well, It's yer fic. :)

Pity.  The new version read so objective and gruesome.  The stream-of-
consciousness version was a little more vague, more personal and 
definitely more gripping.

Sebastian
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