On Tue, 4 Jun 1996, Mike W. Loader wrote:
On Mon, 3 Jun 1996, Richard D. Lawson wrote:
I would like to thank everyone for their suggestion's about Nabiki's
nightmare. I went back and forth over the different version, and
everyone had excellent reasons for which one I should use. After coming
back to the story cold and reading each version, I finally chose one.
*sigh* Awww....I liked the stream-of-consiousness method a lot better. Oh
well, It's yer fic. :)
Pity. The new version read so objective and gruesome. The stream-of-
consciousness version was a little more vague, more personal and
definitely more gripping.
Sebastian