*Way* cool!

I was initially put off by the format.  I don't know why.  Nuts, I 
guess.  It's great to see something so different in style from what else 
is posted here, especially when it's so effective...that had to be by 
far the best of the many "doom, gloom, depression, and there's no 
getting better" Ranmafics I've seen.

I'm a big fan of music and musical lyrics for the stories they half-tell, 
and the emotions they express without explaining.  Poetry and 
medium-based art tend to be too ethereal, stories too bogged in the 
details, but music and musical lyrics are just right (do I sound like 
Goldilocks?).  This story *really* caught that feel well...better than 
what musical videos I have seen, certainly.  

Again, wow!  Hope to see similarly inventive fanfics soon!

Jeff

****jdrutsch@ucdavis.edu***********************Jeff Rutsch************* 
"Ranma's not a boy...he's a girl!"
"Akane is MY fiancee!  You TOUCH her, and I'll KILL you!"
"Ranma, change back into a boy while I buy you some time."
"But if I seem to act unkind/it's only me, it's not my mind."
"Ranma [sic],/give your heart to Akane [sic]. /Soon,/right away."
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