Very, very good. I enjoyed the Ryoga/Ukyo scenes, and found the bit with
Nabiki rather touching.
   Although, I'm still not sure why you wanted to bring Akari into it...
   Of all the "Akane find out who P-chan is" scenes I've ever read, this
has to be the most calm and uneventful. Why is Akane so rational? (not
that its a bad thing, mind you...)
   I've really enjoyed following this fic. Hope to see the next
installment soon.

- Mike of No Particular Title or Handle
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