Subject: Re: [FFML] has no one read part 9?
From: sysop@newberry.edu (Todd Hill)
Date: 6/3/1996, 7:53 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

At 12:47 AM 6/3/96 -0700, you wrote:
At 02:02 AM 6/3/96 -0500, you wrote:


  I did find the scene where Ukyo reworks her boy's uniform outfit
in a feminine mode a tiny bit peculiar. You appeared to be still in
somewhat of a lemon mood; I found the mental image of Ukyo with her
jacket open a little...ah...distracting...(H_H) I really can't see

Well... I am trying to do two things here 1. explore Ukyou's
femininity and 2. add to the sexual tension between her and Ryouga.

I was mearly expounding on the slightly lemonish scene in part 7 
where she is looking in the mirror. This is an adult story, where I
am trying to put together how the characters actually feel and what
they are thinking... so there might be lemony bits every once and a
while without going too far. Ever read Careful Destiny? Gosh I liked
that story... that is the mood I am trying to achieve.


Misa-chan,

That is probably one of the best compliments I could've ever received on
that work.  From the bottom of my heart, Thank You.



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