At 11:25 PM 6/2/96 -0700, you wrote:
*VERY LOUD screams of anguish*
Why couldn't you have let him marry Rei Rei!!??
Now she'll be broken hearted, waiting for the
one she has fallen for to return. -_-
AAARRRGGGGH!!!!!!!
*sighs*
Otherwise from that bit of angst, I'd say it was
rather nice, Mousse starting to become another Ranma.
Just one suggestion. Spell Check. ^_-
Wing. [ I still can't believe he left her... I mean.. I
know why... but... *screams* I hate it when the
3rd person perspective let's you see the
imbalances... *screams* ]
Unless this is a rewrite, you'll be surprised at the second part...the END
of the second part....
Aaron Stolz ------- astolz@direct.ca