Well, which of these did you like better?  I still kinda like the first 
one for its stream-of-consciousness image; but I also like the third one 
- it's a little more graphic.  Which do you think evokes a better image 
of terror and despair?

the first.

signed, phoneynt
-----------------------------------------
| ******** END * TRANSMISSION ********* |
-----------------------------------------
       drward@richmond.infi.net