[Nabiki wolf stuff snipped]

Well, which of these did you like better?  I still kinda like the first 
one for its stream-of-consciousness image; but I also like the third one 
- it's a little more graphic.  Which do you think evokes a better image 
of terror and despair?

I like the first - I think it more accurately reflects Nabiki's mind at
the time.  Plus, hey, why the need to be more graphic?

--Sean Gaffney
--who will write a happy fic if he has to kill everyone to do it...