Attractiveness Factor:

I'm happy to see you use my idea (Akane accidently kissing Shampoo);
but I gather you're not sure where to take the story (it'll be
especially hard not to take it down the lemon path, although you ought
to try your hand at a lemon someday).  I fyou have any ideas you want
to bounce off of me or the list please post them....

well, i'm still working on ch. 2.  it's almost doubled in size,
and i've integrated the _books_ with the story as well.

i don't want it to be a lemon, because it's pretty clear everyone here
finds lemons boring.  

you're right, you're exactly right.  i really don't know where to send the
story from here.  i'm thinking about it.  meanwhile, i'm doing these other
fics.

signed, phoneynt
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