We've got the Ranma opening up drama, which is well done (you know
(and not just in the fanfic world), the man has the patience of a
saint when you look that things on a long term scale).

The Kasumi drama, with some interesting as well as some distrubing
things that aren't entirely followed up on (perhaps just as well).

And the ramifications of the Nabiki disaster are so great it's perhaps
disproportionate (sp.); perhaps something subtler is called for in
this fanfic. (and the perp needs greater motivation to do something
that drastic).

kasumi sent genma to osaka, she fragged nabiki's computer.  her "drama"
is supposed to be her reasons for wanting to help ranma & akane.

is the story confusing, or are you saying i need to focus on only one
aspect of the story?

signed, phoneynt
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