I told you I'm not going to stop till I read all my fanfics in my HD.
here are more
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FURIKAN SUMMER PARTS 2 & 3
by John Biles
 Grammar: 8.  I saw a few mistakes
Story:  9.8  Excellent, excellent, excellent.
Character:  9  They develope extremely nicely
Humour: 8 Some parts are I thought extremely funny.
Overall:  9.99 Definitely one of the top ten Fanfics written in my
category.  Its up there with Elseworlds, Stepping Stones, and Crys Saga.
(Hey, I loved Crys Saga okay!?)
THE CRYS SAGA  THE WHOLE THING
by Chris Schumacher
Grammar: 6
Story: 9 Otaku wish fulfillment at its finest
Character: 9  Loooong story helps this to develop the number of
characters Chris created.
Humour: 9  Some are stupid, some are funny, and some were stupid- funny.
 Few John Biles type humor also.
Overall. 9  A classic.  There were storied like this written before
this, but I think this is the best one out there.