Here's some more C & C of fanfics old and new
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Fighting Ranma.  The Serious Anime -
     The story of the cursed Ninja Warrior.
by Gretton
Grammar:  8  No big mistakes that I saw.
Story:  7  gets old after a while
Characters: 7
Humor:  7  Funny in the beginning, but it kinda dissapated near the end
Overall: 7
The Ko Ryu 18 Steps pt 1-3
by David Gao.
Grammar:  8 I saw some mistakes here and there
Story: 6.  Another kidnapped Akane and Ranma save her type plot
Character: 8
Humor:?  I have no idea if this is supose to be humoous
Overall:  6
RANMA 1/2
 Girls' Night Out
 by Rogue1
Grammer:  8
Story:  5  a yawner
Charcter: 6  Im not sure about that Ukyou character... she seemed to be
not herself lately
Overall: 5
"Could it be. . .?  At last!  The nannichuan!"
by S. James
Grammer:  8
Story: 8
Character: 8
Humor: 8
Overall: 8
Nice story.  Its your typical  fighting tournament type plot.  Those are
always entertaining unless you over do it.
Ah!!  Ranma-sama??  pt 1
by Richard Beaubien
Grammer: 5  Spell check.
Story: 7
Character: 7
Humor:6
Overall: 7
My first OMG & Ranma crossover.  I liked it the first time.
Ranma 1/2 Special:  The Master of the Drunken Fist
by Chris J. Randolph
Grammar:  8
Story: 9  Its one of those ew opponent that the hero must face type
story.  Hey, if I like Dragon Ball, I should like this story.  And it is
well written too I might add.  I wonder if he finished this.
Character: 7
Overall:  8
I want the next part!!  Its a cool story.  This influnenced the Mantis
Fang  fanfic by SC.  (Its not out yet.)
Chrono Trigger 1/2
 by Don Wang
Grammar:  7  You got the basics down cold.  Dont use <> in expressing
thought in a non script format;  its kinda annoying.
Story: 6  What the heck was the ending?  Ranma dies or something?  The
Akane and Robo dialougs was good.
Characters: 6  Ok, the Chrono Trigger gang was too strong, I mean they
are not DragonBall Z people.  Ranma seemed to be not himself that day.
If Ranma did die at the end, that is unreal.  I dont think Ranma will be
that reckless into a fight.  I mean, Ranma and gang should put up a
better fight I thought.
This is a straight foward story. None of the basic threes.
Overall: 6
Ranma 1/2 : Daydreams
by Christian Gadeken
Grammer:  9
Story:  8  It could have been longer.
Character: 8
Lemon: 1  Just hinted.
Overall: 7 Short but entertaining
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sorry about the spelling errors and grammar errors.  I was too lazy to
spll check and to look it over.