Charles Lewis wrote:

                Ranma 1/2: Angel's Spit

Great title!

Foreword:  I'm not sure if this even counts as an entire fanfic.

Nope. Where's the rest? Even with one more paragraph with them standing 
up and going thier seperate ways or something!

 It's
really nothing more than a sketch.  I'll leave the setting and context as
an excercise for the reader.

Well, the setting is obvious (in a park). The context/place in the 
continuity of the origional storyline...I have no idea. It could be 
anytime...depending on what had/is going on to bring this moment to 
life.

I think most of you will get it.

Obviously, I didn't.

[snip story]

It was well written and interesting though it really is a 'sketch'. If 
you are going to work on this, you might want to go into the character's 
heads a little more. I guess I was just left feeling unsatisfied. 
*shrug*

Laters!

Windlily
(littlecritter@overyonder.com)