Hi Charles!

Ah, this time was a learning and growing experience.  The first part of
this started out switching perspectives between the two people about 5 or
6 times as I tried to describe everything that was happening.  A writing
friend said do it from one perspective!  So I took the leap and found that
it was better. :)

Agreed!
 

Please let me know if you liked it!  Please let me know if you hated it
(and why)!  Domo Ariigato!

Interesting! I like it! More!

Little Windlily
(littlecritter@overyonder.com)