An intriging chapter 1. (Or part 1, or whatever.) I'm gonna pull Dec. &
Inv. off the remailer tonight.
   I liked the way Nabiki was presented. A lot of fics tend to play up the
"soulless monster" aspect of her, and I always get a warm an fuzzy feeling
when she is portrayed without the Kafkaesque slant. What can I say, I like
happy endings.
   Kuno apparantly hasn't changed a bit. :)
   Found it interesting that both Ranma & Kuno's children were named after
old nicknames/aliases of their parents.
   Continue, by all means. This kind of stuff makes a nice change from
fuzzball comedy or sadfics.

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