At 01:00 AM 29/05/96 EST, you wrote:

Can anybody give C & C on this fanfic?

Hmm, it's been a few weeks since I read it so
just going by memory it's the one starring
Mousse right?
This is definitely a more serious fic since Mousse
has spent a few years in various parts of Asia to
develope his martial arts skill.  His character is
definitely determined and more than a bit grim, not
like his usually goofy, slapstick self.  There really
is not a lot of the usual Ranmaverse humour, Mousse
gets seriously hurt, physically as well as emotionally.
I would definitely recommend this for people who 
like the more martial arts/dark/serious fics.
All in all it was pretty good,  but definitely a grim spin
on the R.T.works.

--Ilsa, OAA and COR