Subject: Re: Info on Shampoo
From: Aaron/Kendra
Date: 5/29/1996, 3:25 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

At 10:29 PM 5/28/96 -0700, you wrote:
On Tue, 28 May 1996, Jack Ji wrote: 
On Tue, 28 May 1996, Mr. the Rutsch wrote:

I really think you should consider not making the lemon side-story of your 
FF publically available.  (snip) 

Well, I didn't plan on making it publicily availible but I do plan on 
posting it on this ML os that I don't get 20 people asking me to e-mail 
them the copy.

Um....I think that's wot he meant by "Publically available". I happen to
agree with him. (See my earlier comment)

  Aaron: The one about not writing the lemon or you'll flame him? I like
fire.. >:)
  Kendra: I like raw plasma, myself...
  Aaron: That's good too :)



In addition, it's pretty much the nature of self-insert things that, in 
terms of the story, readers don't really care about the self-inserted 
author.  The inserted author can only be appreciated as a Joe 
Average...not supposed to be interesting, as much as providing an 
alternate viewpoint to the anime universe.  It seems to be the general 
concensus of everybody who ever lived that graphic written descriptions 
of sex aren't interesting in and of themselves, but can be an interesting 
plot device between interesting characters...so it's hard to justify a 
lemon Shampoo/author scene.      

Well, If I didn't, I'm not gin't do put it in first person. That's too 

Huh? Translation?

He meant "I'm not gonna put it in first person" or "I'm not doing it first
person" or somthing like it...and if he did *THAT* That adly, I'm *glad* I
didn't read his 'fic...

hard. Well, maybe you'll change your opinion once you see HOW did it.

Or maybe not. Write it if you have to, but make it request only.

  Kendra: [in a shimmering blue/purple suit of power armor that looks like a
cross between a hardsuit and platemail and holding out her right hand, which
has a bright sphere of energy just in front of it, pointing it at Ji] You
post that Lemon to the list and I deep fry you in your own blood.
  Aaron: [sweating] uh..n..now now, Kendra...yo..you don't have to...
  Kendra: [glaring at Aaron] you mean you WANT to read about this punks
demented wet-dreams??
  Aaron: well since you put it that way....




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