I know you keep saying no more revisions, but...

I was under the impression that the Jusenkyo springs were restored.  
Check the summary for Volume 38.  The only reason Ranma doesn't cure 
himself while in China is that all of the pools are overflowing during a 
rainstorm, and to throw himself in one pool is to risk having several 
curses afflict him at once.

Also, if the pools were destroyed, where did they get the Spring of 
Drowned Boy water that they used to bribe Akane into marrying Ranma?  
(Sorry, don't remember the Japanese name.)  I think it was stated in the 
summary that he got it in China.

Anyhoo, just to let you know, I believe that the pools are still 
working, according to RT.

This is a good piece of work and is almost how I would have written it. 
 The kiss scene was great, although a bit too abrupt - how Akane goes 
from anger to passion so quickly is a little disturbing.

Well, I've only read as far as this chapter so far, although the other 
chapters are by my bed waiting to be read.  That in and of itself should 
tell you how much I've enjoyed the first three.  :)

-Richard
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