At 04:47 PM 5/28/96 -0600, you wrote:

<<post snipped>> <<duh!>> ^_^

Go with it as written!  (flesh out (er... gomen...) some of the details to
make the story flow more smoothly if you like, but I think you did a
bang-up job.

Zen-

I already did! ^_^ I posted it to the ML last night. Actually, I send an 
even better version than the one last night (thanks Kun-chan for the hints)
to WW and hopefully it will be up on the remailer in a few days (thanks WW!)

hugs to all

-misa
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