Subject: Re: [FFML] Oh My God - Chapter 15 (part b)
From: Mink
Date: 5/28/1996, 6:54 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com
Reply-to:
fanfic@fanfic.com

On Sun, 26 May 1996 20:41:45 -0400,
 in <199605270041.UAA14030@access4.digex.net> you wrote ...

 >A nit: while you don't say this, I got the impression Chia-Yao's
 >armour was just Kevlar (you ought to capitalize it, since it's a
 >Dupont trademark); modern body armour plates might include Kevlar in a
  ^^^^^^
*** WRONG ***

Harold,

  Don't take this too seriously - I'm a nit picker myself.

  If you're going to nit pick about trade names at least get the
  name of the company correct the way you spelt is incorrect;
  it should be Du Pont (if you're using the short form).
  The full name being E.I. Du Pont de Nemours Incorporated.
  
  You can have your chance for revenge shortly as my fanfic
  should hit the ML in about a month or so. There'll be plenty
  of material to go at; I got an attack of Vliet-itus :) and it's
  currently hovering around the 500k mark. I still haven't
  figured out the cure for Vliet-itus; damn thing keeps growing ....
 
All the best,
  Robin.

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