Subject: Re: [FFML] L in L NEW!!! (Part 7) MORE ADDED- AKANE FINDS OUT
From: bastian@enterprise.mathematik.uni-essen.de (Sebastian Weinberg)
Date: 5/28/1996, 5:47 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com
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bastian@enterprise.mathematik.uni-essen.de

 On Sun, 26 May 1996 17:41:28 -0700 Misa-chan said:

: Chapter 7
: Truth
:
: 	"Hey, isn't the school back in the other direction?"
: Ryouga asked as they walked away from the grove where he and Ukyou
: had "lunch" with Ranma.

Err, you still have that opening scene her back in part 6.


: 	The smile began to settle itself deep inside of Ukyou's
: heart.

Aawwwwww. <sigh>  Cute. :)


: 	"Ryouga is P-chan, isn't he?" Akane asked, her face

I've always thought that subconsciously she knew all along.


: 	Akane looked up into his pale eyes and stood on her
: tiptoes to give him a small kiss before saying, "I uderstand  that

understand.


: 	"Baka!!!" she yelled over her shoulder, and added, "Just
: RUN!!"
: 	Ranma smiled and yelled, "Tomboy!!!"

Very nice.  Too many happyfic authors just drop the rivalry
completely as soon as the two admit they love each other.


: 	Behind them the sun set, watering the sky with a sea of
: gold and blue, ending the day. And, one by one, the stars awoke
: from their slumber.
: Marisa Price
: marisa@gladstone.uoregon.edu

You *might* want to add a blank line in there. :)


Sebastian
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