ok i didnt get alot of bad c&c on dizzy japan, thats good.
one thing i'd like to make clear though, i dont have access to
any spell checkers, i am using a very old 286 to write my storys
and a labtop to get and send mail. ok, now im gunna try another kind
of writing, alot of people dislike script (not me) so tell me what think
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also this story is very short, but this is really just trying to find my
strong points in writing.

                       Ranma1/2: wedding jidders


It is early morning, saturday, Ranma walks into Akane's room.
"Akane, umm.."
"What are you doing here?"
"well, we are getting married tomorrow..."
Ranma, walks over to Akane who is sitting on her bed, her hair
is glisting in the sunlight as it passes through the window.
Ranma looks into her large brown eyes, he takes her hand.
"look Akane, if you are haveing any regrets, i'll make the old
man call it off..."
Akane holds his hand tighter, "im not, are you? ranma?"
"no! its just that we realy never got along..."
"i think we got along fine, two years ago when we were both 16
we couldnt stand each other, but i think we kinda grew out of that."
"Akane, i really do..."
just then Nabiki burst's into the room, "hey you two lovers arent 
trying to get out of this marrage are you? i put alot of money into
this, if you two dont go through with this i wont get paid, and if
i dont get paid i wont be happy."
Akane looks at her older sister who is now 19, "still going out with 
kunou, nabiki?" ranma askes with a smirk. 
"i didnt want to go out with him ok? he paid me and well..."
Akane starts to giggle.
"WHAT?" Nabiki quicky askes looking at the now laughing pair.
"Yea Nabiki, i remember how much you didnt want to go out with him,
you only spent 3 hours getting ready for the date." Ranma manged to get
out. "besides he didnt pay you THAT much" Akane added.
Nabiki throws her nose into the air and marchs out of the room. "besides
if it IS any of your bisness, Yes i am going out with him again."
Akane and Ranma have a small laugh together.
"its been a while since we have accualy laughed together, ranma."
Akane looks up at ranma, he looks as if he's trying to say somthing
but cant.
"what is it Ranma?"
"umm, Akane.." he looks directly into her eyes. " i..um..well.."
"Yes? What is it?"
just then Kasume calls from down in the kitchen. "Breakfast is ready."
"Ranma, lets go eat."
Ranma gets up and starts twords the door. "Akane, i...I always have liked
you." at that he leaves the room.
"you to Ranma, you to..."

*FIN*

well what did you think? now thats probly the best writng ive ever done.
please e-mail me and tell me what you think! ento@powernet.net
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