hello agian this is Entomorph, it seems that not many people
liked my Kodiaks Fate saga, so i gunna put it on the shelf for
a while and start somthing differnt, normal short ranma storys.
i like C&C to an extent, (dont dare critsize my spelling!)
so e-mail me at ento@powernet.net and tell me what you think!
RANMA1/2: dizzy japan
(we see ranma sitting on the floor in front of the tv wathing the news)
News guy: we are expecting bad weather in japan in the next day, i mean
bad, possible tornado warnings....
Akane: you arent buying that are you? a tornado in japan?
Ranma: i guess not...were did you come from anyways? i didnt hear
you enter.
Akane: looks like your getting worse than your father(she smirks)
Ranma: and it looks like your getting to be more uncute!
Akane: no matter...
Ranma: what you arent gunna hit me?
Akane: no,i'll just send a twister after you!
Ranma: shut up!
soun walking into the room: hey you two, arent you gunna be late
for school?
Ranma: we have today off.
Akane: yea miss Takino had another idea..
soun: building another bomb?
Ranma: yup you guessed it.
soun: crazy witch...
(nabiki and ryoga come running into the room)
nabiki: i let ryoga in because theres a big storm outside.
ryoga: and not cheap either...
Akane: why must you charge for everything?
nabiki: 5000 yen and i'll tell you.
Ranma: 5000 yen and i'll...
soun: RANMA!
Ranma: what?
nabiki: ha! (at that she leaves the room)
ryoga: it really is windy out there...
Ranma: see!?! it is a tornado!!
Akane: ranma your stupider than you look!
Ranma: we'll see!! HAHAHA!! you'll all see, run little men run!
ryoga wispering to akane: is he alright?
akane wispering back: he's scared that a twister is coming.
ryoga: oh my god a giant tornado!!!!
Ranma: AHHHHHHHH!!!!! RUN!!!! (Ranma bursts out of the room screaming)
ryoga: haha!
Akane: baka....
(we cut over to genma walking outside, he is in his panda form because
of the rain. he looks up and in front of him is a giant vortex of wind.)
Genma sign: *gulp*
(he is picked up into the twister and thrown.)
Akane: its alright Ranma. why does this scare you so much?
(we see ranma and akane sitting on the floor in the dojo)
Ranma: when i was little dad would always try and teach me new
techniques...
Akane: like catfu?
Ranma: exactly, one day he took me to some place were there are
tornados all the time, he made me go into a cabin and stay there
alone for 1 week, i didnt know why at the time..
Akane: so what happened?
Ranma: the last night i was there a giant tornado hit ripping
everthing to shreds, i barely made it out alive!
soun: i thought it was a little tornado and you were found the next
day crying your eyes out, genma said that it wasnt even strong enough...
Ranma: shut up!! were did you come from anyways??
(out of nowere genma comes crashing through the roof)
Ranma: what the? (pours hot water on Genma
changing him back into a man..were he got the hot water from? no idea,
this is ranma remember?)
genma: it was huge!
Ranma: what was?
Akane: look!!!
(they all look up and there out from the opening there is a giant twister
about 200 yards away)
Ranma: its here!
(the wind starts picking up stronger than ever...they all have to cover
there ears because of the noise)
Ranma: we gotta get out of here!!!
(genma stands and makes a mad dash out of the dojo with soun. they are
thrown through the air)
Akane: Ranma do somthing!
Ranma: like what ask it to go away?
(it starts to rip the dojo appart, Ranma jumps on top of Akane...)
Akane: what happened?
Ranma: is it over? were did it go?
Akane: umm what is that?
Ranma: we are in the eye of it!!
Akane: what are you tal...
(they are suddenly both thrown through the air)
Ranma: AKANE!!!
(Ranma is up in the twister flailing about uncontrolably, he looks over
and see colone on a broom)
colone: ill get you my pretty and you little dog to!
(Ranma suddenly strikes the ground)
Ranma: oww!! im alive? (thinking) were is akane? i gotta get out
of here but not without her!
Akane: Ranma help me!
(Ranma see's akane about 100 yards away, he trys to get to her but
the debris keeps nocking him back)
Akane: ranma help im stuck under this unusualy large board that has
seemed to come from nowere!
Ranma: Akane! i cant get through!
Ryoga: ill do it ranma! stay here!
(ryoga makes a dash for akane, he is hit multiple times by the
flying debris but does not stop)
ryoga: almost there!
Ranma: watch out your being picked up!
ryoga: wha? (he looks down to see that he is 3 feet off the ground)
Ranma: ive had enough of this! (he raises his hands into the air)
HIDROU SHODEN HA! (he blasts a large amount of energy twords the
twister blowing it far away.) Akane! are you ok?
(ryoga hits the ground)
Ranma: come on ryoga, help me with this board!
(ranma and ryoga free akane)
Akane: thank you ranma...
ryoga: the blast of energy, it was so powerful!
Ranma: not as powerful as that twister...i fell sorry for the
next persons house it hits..
(ryoga notices the dojo, it is in ruins)
Akane: we can restore it, at least the house is ok...
(we cut to Kunou's mantion)
Kunou: haha! you think you can take on the blue thunder?
(the giant twister slams into Kunou's mantion tearing it to shreds)
Kunou flying through the air: i will not lose so easy!!
the end.
well what did you think? no big plot so you cant critisize me on that ;)
please e-mail me and tell me what you think! ento@powernet.net
thanx!
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