At 11:28 AM 5/26/96 -0700, you wrote:

ok this is my final attempt to post this right.

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Authors note---> this is my first fanfic ever, I got this idea from the
Crys-saga, please exscuse any spelling errors, I am the worlds worst
speller. soon I will have a page for this fanfic because i hope it to be an 
ongoing series like that of the Crys-saga (only mine will end, not just
leave you hanging) if you have anything to say just e-mail me at..
ento@powernet.net if I don't get e-mail from people saying that
they want me to continue writng then there realy is no point in writng
this fanfic, (and i realy do want to) so please e-mail me and tell me what
you think! thanx!


(we see Robert sitting at home, it is early in the morning, he is putting 
some stuff in his backpack.)

Robert: (thinking) god, I really hate school... I wish I didnt have to go 
today I just know that nick is gunna kick my ass...

(Robert puts on his shoes and walks to school, on the way he trys to walk on 
the railof the wall like his favorite person from the Ranma1/2 series always 
does but fails...)

Robert: why cant life be more like Ranma1/2...

(he arrives at school. we cut to the end of the day Robert is beat up and 
dirty...)

Dion: hey Robert did they get you again?

Robert: yea... they didn't have to throw me in the garbage can though....

Dion: you need to learn to fight! then you wont have to take that crap anymore.

Robert: the year is almost over... I'll be a softmore next year no more of 
this picking on the little freshman crap...

Dion: we'll see... I think nick's just got it in for you buddy, it's hard 
being the new kid...

Robert: he'll get his...

(Robert arrives home, he falls onto his bed)

Robert: I wish I was in the ranma1/2 world...(his eyes begin to tear) 
PLEASE!!!!!
(we see a white flash of light....) what the hell was that? were am I?

Man: you are in the middle of nowere my boy.

Robert: who are you?

Man: your world is gone...

Robert: what??? what are you talking about?

Man: nuclear war.. a sad thing really.. but you have been giving another 
chance..
(Robert stares odly at the man.) you'll see my boy....you'll see.......

(Robert opens his eyes only to see he is in the middle of a street)

Robert: what the hell?

Ranma: watch out!!!

(Ranma pushes Robert out of the way as a giant rock comes flying by.)

Robert: what the hell??

Kunou: come back here Ranma!!

(Ranma goes to start running again when he notices somthing.)

Ranma: that charm!

Robert: what?

Ranma looking at Roberts chain: that's the charm on that chain that soun was
babbling about! come with me!

(Ranma grabs Robert by the arm and starts to run, just then Robert passes

out..)

                                 RANMA1/2
                               Kodiak`s fate
                          episode 1-fates begining

I'm sorry...I got this far and had to stop...the Crys Saga was bad enough at
times without having what looks like somthing a lot like it starting
up...anyways...as useful C&C, you might want to describe just what "Robert"
and "Dion" *LOOK* like...(Another of the reasons I like prose...it almost
forces you to describe things very well) this entire thing (as far as I read
anyways) needs more description! We didn't know Robert was wearing ANYTHING
until Ranma pointed out a chain...how did Robert know he had MOVED somewhere
to ask "Where am I?" afterthe flash of light, etc...in short...it needs
work...lots of work...

Aaron Stolz-astolz@direct.ca E-mail me anytime! I'm on for HOURS on end all the 
time, so you might even get a reply soon after you send it! *******************