This is my first-ever attempt at a fanfic.  It's a Ranma 1/2 story.  It's

pretty serious for Ranma, 

but it's a story that I've always wanted to tell.  Please let me know what

you think; I'm very 

interested in some Commentary and Criticism.

Thanks,

-Richard

        HI, I know you have been getting alot of feed-back for your story,
but I just had to comment on how well done it was. I really liked the way
you protrayed Kasumi, and it was in a way that would never had doned on me
if you hadn't wrote that story... Great Job buddy!
        I, however, have just one question...
                                When are the little elves going to have
there own Fanfic?????  ;P

Ja Mata
                                                                        KazeKiri
                                                                       (Phil
Lam)