I realy liked this story but I have two problems with it.  

One when gromph is tricking the gaurd into a "vacation" the gaurd 
would always take his wepons with.  Drow NEVER go anywhere without an 
arsenal.  
Two the drow warrior would be much more at a disadvantage suddenly 
going into broad daylight from pitch darkness,  remember it takes a 
bit of time to switch from infravition to normal sight and drow are 
very bad in bright light.  As an example of this when Zak whent to 
kill all of the pristesses in house DeVier only the matron mother 
recovered enuf to try anything after the light pellet came out.  so a 
common worrior would not be able to act for at least a minute if not 
longer.  
Well I hope you keep writing I liked it so far,  
Kelly Conrad Davies Schultz
kellys1@randolph.spa.edu but only for a little while
Shade and sweet water.
Skywise

P.S. read Sailor Moon V    and the Circe Prodject
     and Bubblegum Zone    and Tokyo Babylon
     and Knights End       and Sailor Moon Refugees
     and Sailor Moon M     and The Wheel of Time
     and Honor Harringt    and Sour Times