Gorgeously written.
Absolutely beautiful.
The characterisation was perfect, and the scenes you
developed were the ones that I'd always wanted to know
more about. I loved the sentimental, 'homey' feel to
the whole project, and unlike another reviewer, was
ecstatic to find the 'fic to be of 'more-than-average-
length' for one of its type.
You've put a whole new slant on Kasumi, and developed
an existing one on Nabiki, and I thank you for both.
Congratulations on a story well-written.
When will we be seeing more?
Yours,
Christopher Willmore