Subject: Re: [FFML] (Non-Lemon) Worst Opening Paragraph
From: Harriso3@ix.netcom.com (Ben L. Harrison)
Date: 5/18/1996, 1:01 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

	Priss tried to force herself to her feet, but to no avail. 
Whatever those... things were, they proved more powerful than any Boomer
she had seen save possibly Largo.  One of them had crippled her armour
with a single blast, and now ignored her as it joined it's 5 companions in
toying with the other 'Sabers.  Suddenly, she saw a strange glow in the
corner near where she landed.  As she dragged herself closer, it revealed
itself to be a glowing pink pen floating about a foot in the air.  The
sounds of battle faded from Priss' awareness as she reached out and
grasped the seeming illusion; then suddenly, her body was infused with
power that healed her wounds as a waterfall of knowledge poured into her
mind.  On instinct Priss stood, turned to face the Youma, and cried:
	"MOON PRISM POWER MAKE UP!" 
    That was evil, though it's been done before (I kid you not!). Priss'
special attack was "Moon motoslave magic!"
--
Ben Kosse bmk7411@cs.rit.edu


I still think Priss would still want to carry some sort of gun.  If someone
really did this it would be great supprise attack.

Bad Guy:   Ha the tiara has no effect on me!!
Priss:     Meet Mr. Boomer Buster mark II [sx: large caliber gun firing]
Bad Guy:   Urk....thud
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