On Sat, 18 May 1996, Marisa Price wrote:

At 04:43 PM 5/17/96 -0500, you wrote:

Two things:

1. VERY good start

At least it's intriguing.

2. WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON?!!!

You have a bunch of sailor senshi either travelling through time or 
popping in from an alternate timeline.  Not quite clear which yet.

And there appears to be some link between the newcomers and the 
senshi-in-residence.  Note how the "local" senshi who collapsed had 
counterparts who were specifically said to be in a very bad way (Mars + 
Jupiter, while Venus is mobile but not fit for combat).  The local Mercury 
probably got a slightly different effect of the link because both Mercury's 
are in reasonable condition.

The abscence of Sailor Moon with the newcomers is an interesting point, 
as is the idea of a enemy who sends in more than 1 Youma at a time. ^_^
And the way Mamoru went down as well... does make one wonder why Usagi 
hasn't felt anything.

                Is it jut me or did this not make much sense?

*I* think it's just you. ;-)

3. Please write more... but make it clearer.

More by all means, but don't make a point of explaining everything as 
soon as it happens...

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