Harvey Torrance Griffin wrote in answer to Marisa Price post:

Two things:

1. VERY good start

        I concur (even if she didn't use the Senshis' real name ;)

Thanks and feh! ^_-
(Just do a search and replace if it drives you insane. Sorry, these are 
the names I'm familiar with.)

2. WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON?!!!

um...wait and see...^_^

                Is it jut me or did this not make much sense?

        Actually, I thought the path WindLily was taking was quite clear
(one word: Timewarp)

Close. ^_^ How did it not make sense?

Windlily looks back over the story...makes perfect sense to me!
D.D.: Um...maybe because you know what's going to happen and left it at 
such a teaser!

3. Please write more... but make it clearer.

        Pretty Please with sugar on top?

Any suggestions on how to make it clearer? I'm not sure if it's just 
because it's the start and not a lot of info has been given yet or if 
it's a real problem. Also, some of this was an experiment that is 
working so far. Trying to make the next part a 'surprise' though Wolf 
figured it out.
 
Thanks for the interest and the comments, I really appreciate it! More 
will be coming soon. ^_^

Windlily
(littlecritter@overyonder.com)