| Subject: Re: [FFML] [Sick/Lemonish]Worst opening paragraphs |
| From: "Kergma, The Chaotic Trickster" <kergma@sv.net.au> |
| Date: 5/17/1996, 1:38 AM |
| To: fanfic@fanfic.com |
On Thu, 16 May 1996, Chris Willmore wrote:
At that point, Happi's eyes widened, and he tensed in places other than that which nature intended... The Amazon wise woman looked at him questioningly, but his only answer was in English: "Oh, boy."
Ouch. that *has* to constitute torture. ~~~~ The Chaotic Trickster - kergma@sv.net.au