Subject: Re: [FFML] [Sick/Lemonish]Worst opening paragraphs
From: "Kergma, The Chaotic Trickster" <kergma@sv.net.au>
Date: 5/17/1996, 1:38 AM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

On Thu, 16 May 1996, Chris Willmore wrote:

At that point, Happi's eyes widened, and he tensed in places
other than that which nature intended... The Amazon wise woman
looked at him questioningly, but his only answer was in
English: "Oh, boy."

Ouch.  that *has* to constitute torture.

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                The Chaotic Trickster - kergma@sv.net.au